The ride of a lifetime
The temperature is trying to mess with me.
I see the finish line up ahead and bikers trying to past me.
I can hear the loud breathing from behind me.
I’m riding alone on a hot road with a biker trying to win past me.
My legs are thumping and my arms are too.
As I see the finish line I put my back into and speed of to first place.
I stand one the first place step I hear people yelling shot people.
I see sweaty bikers along hot as ever.
My legs are thumping with pain but I smilie hard.
I came first.
hi l like this what made you wright on this tpoic
ReplyDeleteHi Shannon,I like that you made this paragraph really descriptive but maybe next time add some pictures.I would like to know do you like biking?
ReplyDeletehi shannon you did a great job your writing is great .
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